birds can't fly with broken wings.

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if you look closely at the second panel there's kind of like a house in shadow with a ring of birds circling over its head.
wings are symbols of flight, we'd sometimes like to fly away but can't. paper and tape won't exactly get you anywhere.
I wanted it to be more obvious that the kid sitting down was wearing a Batman shirt, it's hard to tell...but Batman although using a symbol of a winged flying animal, can not actually fly himself.
sorry if it doesn't make sense.
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The people look rather stiff to me, and the details in the second panel don't exactly match up or go well with following up the flow of the first panel. And anatomy problem. need to think about variation in values, because the shading in here is too "everywhere".
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ink.
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"we made wings out of paper, tape, & strings."